I am a ____. Hello. In the beginning, I lived peacefully with my brothers and sisters in a big house. We were like fortune cookies. We all looked alike and sounded alike. However, we each had our own unique qualities. We were very compact in there, so compact that we couldn’t move a muscle. My best bro, Jerome, always told me funny jokes, the kind of jokes that makes you laugh so hard you choke. Legend has it that while we sleep, a savior will come, break through the seal, and bring us out. This place is very peaceful, but we can’t do anything. We want to be free.
One night, I was awoken by a strange sound. I looked around but there was no cause for the noise, but when I looked up, the seal was open. The savior’s mystical 5 servants broke through! They held me, levitated me in the air, and brought me out. I was overjoyed. I am free! At least, that was I thought. The saviors servants kept me in the air and was met by 5 more. 2 saviors! What! I was confused until I felt my outer clothing being taken off, the feeling of touch on my skin burned. I never been touched without my clothing on. It had disappeared in a pit, full of other outer garments. What is this? The 5 servants began to let me go. I was plummeting to the ground below at exceptional speed. I hit the blue, rough ground, feeling my bones crack, the pain was unbelievable. I had never felt anything like it. Little creatures, as small as the dust specks around, began to jump on me. They crawled around me and began to interact with my body. I was helpless, I could not move. I then began to be raised into the air. The horror was just beginning.
I began to enter a bottomless abyss. When I thought it was all over I landed on a wet, moist, surface. I didn’t know what I was on until I felt my flesh melting away. My red and white skin was fading into a bleak bland color. It burned worse than the touch of the servants hands. Soon enough, my flesh was gone. All that was left were my bones. I felt so much pain that I could not feel anything anymore. The acid melted my bones to weak sticks. Then as I was seeing what was happening around me the only light began to close on me as I heard a snapping noise. it took me a moment to realize that it was my bones. Sharp, serrated saws were penetrating my bones. They dissolved into a liquid and fell into a bottomless pit. The I felt like I was disintegrating in some sort of a hell. And when then after I felt as if my life was going to end by being in millions of tiny pieces I began slipping down the bottomless pit. I was trying to hold on, but the surface was rising to flush me down into endless torment. So this is freedom…
One night, I was awoken by a strange sound. I looked around but there was no cause for the noise, but when I looked up, the seal was open. The savior’s mystical 5 servants broke through! They held me, levitated me in the air, and brought me out. I was overjoyed. I am free! At least, that was I thought. The saviors servants kept me in the air and was met by 5 more. 2 saviors! What! I was confused until I felt my outer clothing being taken off, the feeling of touch on my skin burned. I never been touched without my clothing on. It had disappeared in a pit, full of other outer garments. What is this? The 5 servants began to let me go. I was plummeting to the ground below at exceptional speed. I hit the blue, rough ground, feeling my bones crack, the pain was unbelievable. I had never felt anything like it. Little creatures, as small as the dust specks around, began to jump on me. They crawled around me and began to interact with my body. I was helpless, I could not move. I then began to be raised into the air. The horror was just beginning.
I began to enter a bottomless abyss. When I thought it was all over I landed on a wet, moist, surface. I didn’t know what I was on until I felt my flesh melting away. My red and white skin was fading into a bleak bland color. It burned worse than the touch of the servants hands. Soon enough, my flesh was gone. All that was left were my bones. I felt so much pain that I could not feel anything anymore. The acid melted my bones to weak sticks. Then as I was seeing what was happening around me the only light began to close on me as I heard a snapping noise. it took me a moment to realize that it was my bones. Sharp, serrated saws were penetrating my bones. They dissolved into a liquid and fell into a bottomless pit. The I felt like I was disintegrating in some sort of a hell. And when then after I felt as if my life was going to end by being in millions of tiny pieces I began slipping down the bottomless pit. I was trying to hold on, but the surface was rising to flush me down into endless torment. So this is freedom…
Reflection
Our assignment was to personify a random object that is not alive. The objective was to describe our object well enough so that you are able to guess what the object is. Techniques that I used in this writing piece were good vocabulary and using descriptive writing risks like simile's. I thought maybe some of the clues could have been better describing of my object, but overall I thought that I had a well described piece of writing.
Our assignment was to personify a random object that is not alive. The objective was to describe our object well enough so that you are able to guess what the object is. Techniques that I used in this writing piece were good vocabulary and using descriptive writing risks like simile's. I thought maybe some of the clues could have been better describing of my object, but overall I thought that I had a well described piece of writing.